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Post by matw63 on Aug 27, 2008 13:07:29 GMT -5
-alarm bells-
the deliberations of a party can lead to wrong decisions especially with no experience original feelings can be lost
-left out in the cold-
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Post by tsu on Aug 30, 2008 11:46:29 GMT -5
i really dont know how you manage to pack so much meaning into such a short piece!! i like this one..a warning tale for the unwary! nicely done (again!!)
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 31, 2008 20:41:18 GMT -5
wow, this was amazing matt. a well placed warning. great work.
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 3, 2008 19:09:07 GMT -5
Bravo Mat!! This is superb. The flow is perfect which is very hard to do with a Drops piece. The poem itself is wonderful! Lady B
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