enkidu
Wandering Muse
Posts: 58
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Post by enkidu on Aug 28, 2008 22:50:33 GMT -5
prayer balls mind kisses hammer lock stop shoving round inside
------------------------ the post does not retain the formatting.. too bad but in concept space lines 2,3,4 so that there is an open circle in the middle of the poem
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Post by tsu on Aug 30, 2008 11:37:43 GMT -5
welcome to drops!! this is so inspired and clever! i like the simplicity and the format would have looked great.. well done!
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 31, 2008 20:34:05 GMT -5
i liked this piece, pity about the formatting simple and effective, i enjoyed the read.
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 3, 2008 19:04:56 GMT -5
enkido, I can picture the circle. Very creative. Nice Drops. Lady B
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Post by matw63 on Sept 12, 2008 7:32:04 GMT -5
very nicely put together... well done
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Post by ElijahsGreyPanthers on Sept 13, 2008 11:12:57 GMT -5
I can see the circle, even without the formatting A well 'rounded' poem, if you'll pardon my pun
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