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Sept 10, 2008 4:47:32 GMT -5
Post by Vogelvrij on Sept 10, 2008 4:47:32 GMT -5
ESCAPE
rapidly ruining rats tails heads kisses
e-d-i-t
butterfly- quits in midnight some sound smaller (delight in contrary)
say stop
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Sept 12, 2008 7:28:32 GMT -5
Post by matw63 on Sept 12, 2008 7:28:32 GMT -5
vogelvrij - interesting drop...to say i understand it would be fibbing, however there is a vibe to it and i think what you have done is very creative.
thankyou for sharing
mat
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Sept 13, 2008 16:26:35 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Sept 13, 2008 16:26:35 GMT -5
Vogel, Oh this is marvelous. I feel the same way. Such is the nature of Drops, eh? Bravo, my friend. Lady B
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Sept 26, 2008 5:59:20 GMT -5
Post by olivialuka131313 on Sept 26, 2008 5:59:20 GMT -5
I loved how fast moving this was, it was like talking to a really witty person and getting caught up in their train of thought and being so impressed with everywhere the conversation could go, and then all of a sudden, " say stop". The whole rhythm is cut short, you're left thinking "Did I say something wrong?", or "Did I misunderstand something critical?". And then there is this feeling where your heart just opens up and you want to try everything possible to understand that thing, or rectify whatever you said wrong. That respect for that person, respect for this poem. Great drops, loved this - have great respect for this!
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