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Post by matw63 on Sept 12, 2008 7:32:41 GMT -5
I thought we were in this together
trial seperation
I feel like a tree with no water
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Post by allmirth on Sept 12, 2008 18:32:48 GMT -5
Most effective little drop. The sense of need is palpable. Thanks much for sharing. Mirth
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Post by Sir Daniel on Sept 12, 2008 23:35:30 GMT -5
Hey Mat, this is very good, I enjoyed the ending. A tree with no water will surely die.
I've felt this way before, I hope never to again.
Daniel
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Post by Vogelvrij on Sept 13, 2008 3:19:42 GMT -5
O, it's so short and nearly too simple, but yet so... powerful. Well done.
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