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yo
Oct 1, 2008 21:35:46 GMT -5
Post by ybakissme on Oct 1, 2008 21:35:46 GMT -5
dress their modernizing baby continusally tabloid vanity risking a shimmer we rewind supporting tenderness
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yo
Oct 2, 2008 1:45:08 GMT -5
Post by Forest on Oct 2, 2008 1:45:08 GMT -5
It reads as a glimpse into unfit parenting to me. I really liked the "risking a shimmer" line. I think those three words speak volumes of the fate of "...their modernizing baby". If people could just acknowledge themselves and their children for who they are, rather than be taken in by the vanity of tabloids and contort their lives, perhaps both generations would see more shimmers?
Yeah, i really liked this one! Great work!
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yo
Oct 4, 2008 20:21:26 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Oct 4, 2008 20:21:26 GMT -5
Bravo yb, an outspoken Drops with an important message. Impressive. Lady B
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yo
Oct 8, 2008 0:41:36 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 8, 2008 0:41:36 GMT -5
simple but powerful little drops piece. I think there many people who need to hear the heart of this.
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yo
Oct 9, 2008 8:55:08 GMT -5
Post by Created2Write on Oct 9, 2008 8:55:08 GMT -5
I agree with the others, a powerful message, simpy put. Good drop. Peace, C2W
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