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Post by Created2Write on Oct 4, 2008 8:12:10 GMT -5
an exhilarating motorcycle drive the surrounding mountain roads continually twisting, winding a vanity stretches the limbs entrusting me to the chilly autumn the wind muffles an outcry tossing it sideways a snake finds death in the grass a sunflower is reduced to wilting a motorcycle rapidly winds the mountain road
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 4, 2008 20:37:58 GMT -5
*gasps* Dang! I felt every word of this piece. Incredible feel, little one. Exalt! Lady B
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Post by Created2Write on Oct 4, 2008 21:25:13 GMT -5
Thank you for the exalt, I am truly honored by it and your encouraging words. Peace, C2W
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Post by tsu on Oct 6, 2008 10:13:07 GMT -5
again wonderful .. amazingly created from drops..the flow is gentle and the imagery arresting! you really are showing your talent here!
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Post by Created2Write on Oct 6, 2008 15:42:25 GMT -5
Tsu, I am humbled by the compliment from one so talented as yourself. Thank you for your kind words. Peace, C2W
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Post by Forest on Oct 6, 2008 21:18:14 GMT -5
Beautifully penned. I live around winding mountain roads so i was really able to see this piece and appreciate the imagery. Never been up there on a bike, but now i know a little more about how it would feel, in a way i hadn't thought. Great stuff!
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Post by matw63 on Oct 9, 2008 12:26:42 GMT -5
c2w - this is a very good drop indeed i like the two differnet scenario's that you have linked cleverley together. the two contrasts of the freedom of riding a motorcycle and the hunting snake is an interesting angle and gets the reader thinking. kudos dudette mat
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Post by Created2Write on Dec 3, 2008 16:01:46 GMT -5
Forest, thank you for your kind words, and glad you could relate as well as enjoy.
Mat, as always, I'm humbled. Peace, C2W
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