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London
Oct 10, 2008 6:33:53 GMT -5
Post by cari on Oct 10, 2008 6:33:53 GMT -5
London
Bustling Metropolis Serenade of traffic horns Stampede of commuters Quietened by moonlight
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London
Oct 10, 2008 11:04:48 GMT -5
Post by tsu on Oct 10, 2008 11:04:48 GMT -5
it is utterly astounding how you have managed to convey the atmosphere of big city life. i love the contrast of the night. a really brilliant drop piece.
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London
Oct 13, 2008 5:42:42 GMT -5
Post by olivialuka131313 on Oct 13, 2008 5:42:42 GMT -5
ooh such an exalt for this! i read each line smooth and slow and then that last line just put goosebumps on my arms. Wow, Cari, this one sure was a treat - Thank you!
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London
Oct 13, 2008 8:51:48 GMT -5
Post by matw63 on Oct 13, 2008 8:51:48 GMT -5
if only the moonlight did calm down london!!!
excellent drop - it speaks in volumes
mat
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