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Post by cynthiana on Oct 13, 2008 10:53:23 GMT -5
Sherry intestine shimmer when a snake muffle in grass. My daughter stretch limb brown burgandy orange outcry sweep fall autumn mountain road. Twist sunflower dress baby wilt death. Nevertheless she prophet highlight clouds.
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 14, 2008 16:24:27 GMT -5
Cynthia, The short clipped words make the impact stronger and the images so haunting. Lady B
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Post by cynthiana on Oct 15, 2008 2:39:59 GMT -5
Thanks a bunch; I had hard time using the words that was there. I'm happy I did good job.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 20, 2008 22:16:12 GMT -5
i really liked this, it was vivid and really well constructed. Loved the last two lines.
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Post by tsu on Oct 26, 2008 10:38:05 GMT -5
i agree..there was so much impact in the delivery of your lines..well written with the drops words!
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