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Post by latysha on Nov 2, 2008 12:22:23 GMT -5
Risking love with someone great. Risking love not counting on fate. Whats the point if its not what its suppose to be, Whats the point when you lied about everything you told me. In the beginning so much love and trust, not even 3 months into the relationship and your already losing my trust. I cant see myself with you, but most of all i cant see myself without you. So much pain and so many hurt feelings, what ever happen to the sunshine after the rain?? My days are always cloudy with you and its turning my heart cold. Risking true happiness or am i risking true love?? Whats true happiness if its not with the one your truely happy with? Whats true love because i have found everything but that. Risking knowing whats real, risking not knowing how love is suppose to feel.....
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Post by matw63 on Nov 3, 2008 15:14:30 GMT -5
welcome to the tps this is a drop that pours from the speakers heart. this tugs at the heart strings. thankyou for sharing mat
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Post by tsu on Nov 3, 2008 16:08:35 GMT -5
hi and welcome! its really hard finding your feet in a relationship..and you have caught all the elements of that so well in this emotional write. i hope to see more of your work around the forum:)
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 15, 2008 13:14:15 GMT -5
hello latysha. Let me add my welcome. I like this poem. It's very heartfelt and honest. I wish I knew the answers! LOl. Lady B
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