|
Post by Created2Write on Nov 29, 2008 15:59:22 GMT -5
She fashioned the dress, a basic craft- supporting vanity, she modernized it in orange shimmers...
He noted it highlighted the sunflower tatoo, his look continuous, mesmerizing...
She found it exhilerating when he linked their limbs, fall leaves surrounding their stretched figures
Their sweeping outcries entrusted to the mountains were reduced to Muffles in the Autumn wind...
C2W
|
|
|
Post by Lord Chancellor Polonius on Nov 30, 2008 0:01:29 GMT -5
So the ruched folds were simply a seductive device employed by the temptress. The use of an implicit paromonasia in the combined ululation of the lovers and the rustling of the autumnal leaves is very effective.
|
|
|
Post by tsu on Nov 30, 2008 10:31:40 GMT -5
just fantastic!! "Their sweeping outcries entrusted to the mountains were reduced to Muffles in the Autumn wind... " c2w!!!..an incredibly gorgeous and cohesive drop..truly inspiring in construction..exalt as soon as i can!
|
|
|
Post by Created2Write on Nov 30, 2008 14:06:32 GMT -5
Polunius, how are you? Thank you for checking this out and for your comments, which I look forward to.
Tsu my friend, you are most kind, thank you for the exalt. I'm glad you liked this.
Thank you both, Peace, C2W
|
|
|
Post by matw63 on Dec 1, 2008 5:14:58 GMT -5
*smiling* gorgeous write my friend
|
|
|
Post by Created2Write on Dec 1, 2008 15:12:23 GMT -5
Hey Mat, thank you
Is it one of those amused smiles? (smiling too) Peace, C2W
|
|
|
Post by cari on Dec 3, 2008 10:23:57 GMT -5
Leaves and Lovers, yes they do go together. Nature and romance blend well too. Cracking piece cw2, I’m taking notes.
|
|