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Post by Created2Write on Jan 9, 2009 18:26:51 GMT -5
A baby stretches it's limbs in disatisfied outcry
Tabloid Rumor is-
The daughter found tenderness with the craftsman when he worked in the outbuilding in the fall.
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 9, 2009 20:05:23 GMT -5
How utterly enchanting my dear. I love the innuendo and the reference to the dirty laundry of the gossip mill. This reminds me of an old song by Cher 'Gypsy's Tramps and Thieves'. Marvelous. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 10, 2009 1:57:24 GMT -5
Lol...I loved this! The flow, the story you told, everything about it made me cry out...**applause**. So nicely done. I think drops is now your knew forte here...lol. Keep them coming.
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Post by matw63 on Jan 10, 2009 3:39:52 GMT -5
c2w - another one to add to the list bravo poetess Mat
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Post by Created2Write on Jan 10, 2009 7:12:53 GMT -5
Lady B, Bobswife, Mat - Thanks, thanks, and thanks for your warm comments. I appreciate you all. Peace, C2W
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 10, 2009 22:43:55 GMT -5
A baby stretches it's limbs in disatisfied outcry Excellent.. what a nicely told tale... and Tabloid Rumor is- [nice pop culture foreshadowing] The daughter found tenderness [nice t after tabloid.. tenderness is a great, non-tabloidy word.. unless ironic] with the craftsman when he worked in the outbuilding in the fall. [there ... lots of info..like a tabloid news report! ] nice! m
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 10, 2009 22:45:05 GMT -5
ps... forgot the first two lines... they really sum up the conclusion! Don't bury the lead and you didn't ... c2w! nice, very, very nice ...m
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Post by Created2Write on Jan 13, 2009 20:39:08 GMT -5
Thanks Molly, I'm glad that you enjoyed this, and appreciate your thoughtful comments. Peace, C2W
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