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Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 11, 2009 0:29:29 GMT -5
Hate-governing snakes trespass. Nurture atrocity. Death winds sweep homelands.
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Post by Created2Write on Jan 13, 2009 20:34:13 GMT -5
You make some really powerful statements in drops. This one is right on point Molly. Peace, C2W
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 14, 2009 16:44:21 GMT -5
Molly. This is very impressive. It is the mark of a a great poet who can make such strong statements in so few words. Brilliantly worded. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 14, 2009 16:44:37 GMT -5
This reminded me of some of the cruel leaders in power throughout the world, and the chaos that they inflict on those who have to live under their rule. Nicely penned. You have a think for this for sure.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 14, 2009 20:34:16 GMT -5
Thanks C2W, Lady, Bobswife ... it is very cathartic to get it out, distilling the frustration helps with the catharsis! I am pretty verbose on political websites... they would probably prefer my haiku. appreciate your validation once again! molly
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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 16, 2009 0:13:02 GMT -5
Good write Molly...so powerful with so few words...loved it! "Hate-governing snakes trespass." That's my favorite line. Thanks for sharing, CbS
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 16, 2009 14:05:31 GMT -5
thanks, cbs ... appreciate your empathy for such sensibility! m
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