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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 16, 2009 0:05:52 GMT -5
She trespassed his vanity, premeditating intestinal narration. She rumored dissatisfaction; the dressing room an outcry. He reduced the fashion typeset. Indefinite clouds spread lifting their capsuling basics. A snake tattoo twisting sideways, continually spread muffled winds.
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 16, 2009 0:35:43 GMT -5
This reminded me of an actor/actress, hence the title and play of words. Just my interpretation. I really enjoyed this, as I do all drops poetry. It's always interesting to see what creative interpretations come out of the list of words. This was fabulous. I do look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Created2Write on Jan 16, 2009 11:20:01 GMT -5
I like the way you wound it into a little short story. Interesting read. Peace, C2W
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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 16, 2009 22:32:08 GMT -5
Thanks C2W and bobswifeforever...I appreciate both of you taking the time to comment, and for the kind words. Best Regards, CbS
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