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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 16, 2009 19:37:49 GMT -5
I'm not really good at this sort of thing, but I figured "why not?". So here it is, the first drops I've done in quite a long time. I hope it doesn't sound funny or anything...lol. The Metamorphosis of Autumn [/u][/color] The clouds stretch around the mountain... Brown, burgundy, and orange nevertheless spread, Complex tenderness nurtured the sunflower. Chilliness...it is the ambiance surrounding my membrane. How is it we trespass the metamorphosis of Autumn? [/center]
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jan 16, 2009 19:41:25 GMT -5
As to the dropping of leaves transform the summer ground into a winter paradise, so does the dropping of words onto your talented pen. This holds true with nature and shows us that Autumn represents change both outside the window and inside our lives.
Great job working with the restrictions of the drops.
~ Daniel
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 17, 2009 1:32:15 GMT -5
Stacamia, What an impacting Drops. I am drawn by the poignancy. The comparing of the seasons of nature to the changing seasons of life and relationships. Such vivid imagery reminds me that all indeed, is not what it seems. We often remember the wonderful and the terrible. How much more we should remember the peaceful, the contentment, the calm.. Such a timely reminder. Spotlight worthy. Bookmarking and Exalt. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 17, 2009 12:28:55 GMT -5
Thanks so much to you both. I know you both know this isn't my normal writing style, but that's what I love about the drops...it compels the writer to step outside of the realm of comfortable and step into the realm of creativity and it really helps the writer reach down deep for things that might never have came to be otherwise. If only more writers would come in here to the drops and take a shot...well now, there would certainly be some wonderful poetry created to share, now wouldn't there?
Love ya~~~ Stacy
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Post by matw63 on Jan 23, 2009 10:18:32 GMT -5
Let it flow, cause you got it girl!! exalts Mat
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