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Post by Sir Daniel on Feb 17, 2009 15:36:02 GMT -5
I D E O L O G Y An electric Pope Adviser to the faithful Spins socialism past philosophers Profit before propaganda Representing the oppressed then concluding each excess as if he were his own opponent. Newspapers regard him as an author The Mayor introduces him to his underground home Me? When a writer advises the public, he is hopeful they suspect the article may be censored. I conclude by offering hope he manages to knock his greedy excesses before they multiply.. (c)'o9 "drops of poetry"
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 17, 2009 18:16:34 GMT -5
wow this was amazing. Congratulations on a magnificent drop!
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 17, 2009 18:51:01 GMT -5
Exalt, Sir Pope Daniel. Elegantly done. Loved the "me" line especially. A serene kind of cynicism you bring, along with a great pic. best, molly
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 18, 2009 0:35:47 GMT -5
I don't even know where to start with this one, Daniel. I mean it was fabulously penned from start to finish. I could hardly believe it was a drops poem. You blew me away with this one, mf. Exalt! Exalt! Exalt! Hugs~~~ Stacy
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 18, 2009 15:48:48 GMT -5
Hurray Danielson. You really brought this one home. The flow and form are marvelous. Simply an awesome Drops! Lady B
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Post by clearbluespark on Mar 2, 2009 20:50:58 GMT -5
Hmm...I enjoyed this piece, great drops. I feel a sort of pity for the pope...maybe it's just the picture...good though...thanks for sharing.
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Post by serenity4u~getting-better on Mar 3, 2009 17:53:41 GMT -5
Very good Sir...... I love this...........
I didn't know I good drop ends .... i guess I need to read the instruc... better...
this is well penned
Exalt
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Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on May 5, 2009 13:29:42 GMT -5
Too bad the electric pope, Didn't get the electric chair..lol
I kid.. very welll penned i agree.. the image helped with that as well.. great work.
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Post by jackthenoisymime on May 13, 2009 20:51:27 GMT -5
Blaspheme!
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