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bones
Aug 16, 2009 11:10:20 GMT -5
Post by thehippyboy on Aug 16, 2009 11:10:20 GMT -5
bones
heroin blackmails me. indulges me in regret. after substituting a split heaven spiritually rotting, she swears she cant dodge bones: it is my spike. It is my strategy, my dreaded ideology it is my bones.
aproaching black, we concealed another bone
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bones
Aug 17, 2009 21:25:19 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Aug 17, 2009 21:25:19 GMT -5
Hey Hippie Boy. You struck gold with this Drops. Truly represents the seductive hold of Heroin. Excellent flow as well. Lady B
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bones
Aug 22, 2009 12:35:35 GMT -5
Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Aug 22, 2009 12:35:35 GMT -5
The flow in this was great. Interesting concept and approach to the drops as well. I thought it was interesting to use bones as the main strong point of this to put emphasis on the heroin. At least that is what I got out of this. Nicely done. I look forward to reading more drops poetry from your talented poetic pen.
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bones
Aug 22, 2009 22:06:19 GMT -5
Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Aug 22, 2009 22:06:19 GMT -5
the beginning of this was probably the greatest hook line ever, very good approach that really made this write shine above the rest.. great read..
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bones
Aug 29, 2009 9:04:07 GMT -5
Post by astroannie on Aug 29, 2009 9:04:07 GMT -5
I like this. It shows what I imagine it to be like.
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