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Post by smokinjoe72 on Aug 25, 2009 4:16:27 GMT -5
Sails regret declared, Heaven above sea sings black, Concealed rock explodes.
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Post by Sir Daniel on Aug 28, 2009 2:25:42 GMT -5
something tells me this boat is about to sink..
very nice haiku, and from the drops words no less.. I love the second line as the heavens truly are black when there is no hope.
tc,
~ Daniel
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Post by bcoyotey on Aug 28, 2009 11:11:17 GMT -5
Very well done, my friend. Bravo! I l live by the sea, so this came alive for me. I like that you made a 'ku out of Drop words. Impressive. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Aug 30, 2009 16:22:14 GMT -5
My exalt button is gone right now, but I'm with Lady B...the fact that you made such an enjoyable 'ku from the drops board blows my mind. I owe ya one. Keep them coming, and I'll be reading.
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