chizl
Wandering Muse
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Post by chizl on Sept 7, 2009 23:48:30 GMT -5
Dreaded Daytime Rots Black PATIENCE
Vintage Skirt Beneath Desire STRATEGY
Migrates Each Discusses Indulges METHOD
Volunteers Logic Vulnerable Beginner DRIVE
Dawn Musician Sings Explodes HEROIN
Dreaded Daytime Rots Black PATIENCE…
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Post by asher02 on Sept 10, 2009 18:08:12 GMT -5
I like how the stanza becomes a more cohesive thought with that last bold and caps word. Interesting style.
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:38:50 GMT -5
I loved the structure of this one, and the bold really emphasized so much. It was like a poem within a poem to me. And I really enjoyed how you started the bold words with patience and ended with that same word as well. Nicely done.
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Post by Chelle on Jan 31, 2010 23:37:00 GMT -5
you know chizl, it did seem to fit together despite the random nature of the words. and the bold font and repetition of the last stanza was a nice touch, bringing it all together.
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