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Post by asher02 on Sept 10, 2009 17:39:37 GMT -5
Concealed desire skips regret Approaching logical substitute Vulnerable dispute discourages promising outlook Dreaded bubble beneath explodes Obscure inertia indulges me Then made it boil Hypothetically declared
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 3, 2009 17:39:24 GMT -5
asher, this drops is excellent in the message portrayed. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:45:41 GMT -5
I agree with Lady B...this is an excellent drops poem and the words you chose were so powerful and passionate to the reader. Nicely done and very much enjoyed. I look forward to reading more from you, especially in the drops board.
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Post by knpoet on Dec 15, 2009 13:35:08 GMT -5
Hi Asher02, that was a great use of the drops, very succinctly put! Well done, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Post by ~ Arty k ~ on Jan 3, 2010 9:47:06 GMT -5
well done drops powerfull image with this drop
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