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Post by metalsoft on Sept 17, 2009 8:16:59 GMT -5
College:Before Breakfast
Substitute etymology Beginner ecology Then how is it dreaded ideology?
Vulnerable musician Spiritual teacher College Physics Stereo rock!
Inertia Heaven Hypothetical Tangent
Chord pocket Sings rocket Sails regret above the prominent dawn
Next method Compresses Context Chat Concealed desire
She Skirt Split Spike
Requisite patience Outlook strategy Diagonal nicknames Logical whole
Discusses Declared Discourages Dispute
Kettle migrates to: Bubble Boil Bowl
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Post by Created2Write on Sept 26, 2009 17:25:36 GMT -5
I kind of like this, and you did a good job with it. Unique. Peace
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Post by Sir Daniel on Sept 27, 2009 16:35:37 GMT -5
loved the ending, it looks as if you had alot of fun with the drops machine.. I liked the fact you put so many words together by first letter as when I do a drops poem I must sort them out the same way too..
~ Daniel
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Oct 17, 2009 12:40:10 GMT -5
I think this is one of the most creative and unique drops poems I've read in quite sometime. I think the way you used the words by themselves the way you did really gave this energy and helped to show that poetry isn't limited to rhyming verse. Nicely done.
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Post by metalsoft on Oct 20, 2009 21:06:48 GMT -5
created-many thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Peace. sirDaniel-Thank you! It was fun to re-live the college days, and the drop terms seem to sort better for me through "first letter". bobswife-Why thank you! I appreciate the encouragement, and I hope to do justice to the next drop set. This took me back to days at the University Of Georgia, and all that really happened (well, maybe not "requisite patience") metalsoft
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 28, 2010 21:32:37 GMT -5
metal, serious fun! m
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