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Post by smokinjoe72 on Nov 8, 2009 7:40:41 GMT -5
Obscure desire sings, Volunteers concealed pocket, - Fakes dreaded device..
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 8, 2009 13:19:35 GMT -5
Hi Joe, This is a great little Drops piece. The title is quite imaginative. Kudos. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Nov 10, 2009 16:55:04 GMT -5
The title was longer than the poem, lol. Well...almost. Interesting piece, flow was great and this really got my intellect flowing and had me thinking. Nicely done.
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Post by knpoet on Dec 15, 2009 13:48:51 GMT -5
Hi, this was a fun read, short and to the point; nicely fashioned drops poem.
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