bedspoet
Established Muse
It only takes one word to start a thousand conversations
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Post by bedspoet on Nov 12, 2009 16:44:46 GMT -5
Ice diamond a supernatural, dark force Wretched void, lonely fears When terror is overlooking my sleep without voice. Throughout the brutal feast to biblical hopes, Only their rants can't enlighten me An insenseitive verdict, arrested.
Bedspoet
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 14, 2009 17:49:34 GMT -5
BP, You managed to convey a great deal of emotion in this Drops piece. Great work. Lady B
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Nov 16, 2009 13:15:09 GMT -5
Yes, I have to agree with Lady B, this is a very emotive poem and I loved it. Nicely done. The opening two lines really grabbed me and had me hooked: I look forward to reading more from you. Hugs and Happy Posting Stacy
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Post by ~ Arty k ~ on Nov 21, 2009 21:31:14 GMT -5
wow this was excellent to get from the drop words well done i have been staring at these words for ever trying to come up with somthing
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