twihardangel
Established Muse
Alternative is Inoxticating
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Frost
Nov 12, 2009 17:11:35 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 12, 2009 17:11:35 GMT -5
I was roaming the site and found Drops of Poetry. Im not really good at poetry, its not really my forte, but i thought id give it a try. This is my first time usuing Drops of Poetry (and really writing poetry), I hope i followed all the rules. Please let me know wha you think.
This, my friend, is what troubles you: Frost
He combats brutal ice. Snow. Terror. Hate. A crystal falls.
Struggles to sleep, He fears the void, darkness succeeds. Lonely without power, without hope, without her. A crystal falls.
Icy bolts forced throughout his backbone, Is it natural? A crystal falls.
Is it supernatural? The crystals fall.
Then Calm. Comfortable. Thankful. Only she, the diamond, comforts.
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Memory
Established Muse
Time and Space, Mortality and Meaning, My Pen transcends
Posts: 230
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Frost
Nov 12, 2009 20:34:22 GMT -5
Post by Memory on Nov 12, 2009 20:34:22 GMT -5
Wow, amazing. Great job.
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twihardangel
Established Muse
Alternative is Inoxticating
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Frost
Nov 14, 2009 9:15:31 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 14, 2009 9:15:31 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Frost
Nov 16, 2009 13:13:54 GMT -5
Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Nov 16, 2009 13:13:54 GMT -5
I enjoyed how this started out troubled, but then ended with a calming effect. At least it did for me. As far as the drops poetry is concerned, as long as you use only the words in the drops of poetry word list, then you're fine. I look forward to reading more from you. Hugs and Happy Posting Stacy
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twihardangel
Established Muse
Alternative is Inoxticating
Posts: 100
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Frost
Nov 16, 2009 18:35:13 GMT -5
Post by twihardangel on Nov 16, 2009 18:35:13 GMT -5
Thanks to my amazingg friend Memory over here, I've been starting to write poetry. I never really have been able to, and now I guess I've found another thing that I like. Dont worry, I'll probably have something' new out by next week. Ive already got something in my mind for a new poem lol.
Anyways, thanks.
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