chizl
Wandering Muse
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Post by chizl on Dec 27, 2009 23:19:08 GMT -5
Enlighten me as I fall asleep Present a paperback feast Dine in my soul Devour the dark Drink till your heart's content
Black hors d'oeuvre's atop platter of white Electric candles ignite Tell me things of hopes and kings Travel with me tonight
Eat of my thoughts Burrow deep in my heart Help my mind to indulge Without pretense without expectation Imagination takes flight
Tempted to leave you Enticed without beckon My eyes close under duress I want to know more I desire to hear them The thoughts of my silent men
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 4, 2010 9:24:15 GMT -5
There's nothing like a great book to escape into at the end of the day. This was magnificent. I loved it! Exalt!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 9, 2010 1:50:39 GMT -5
Wowee! I applaud you chizl. Like Stacamia said, nothing equals literature for providing the fall-into-the-rabbit-hole escape. Not only is this an excellent Drops, it is a free flowing kindred spirit write. Exalt. Lady B
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Post by tonaleclipse on Jan 18, 2010 8:17:07 GMT -5
That work is inspiring. You really created a tension throughout the piece, and then beautifully resolved it into sleep. I'd love to read more.
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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 20, 2010 13:00:44 GMT -5
"...Black hors d'oeuvre's atop platter of white Electric candles ignite Tell me things of hopes and kings Travel with me tonight..."
So many lovely lines created in this piece, chizl. Thanks for sharing it...I love the stanza above, very vivid imagery. Exalt!
Thanks again.
G.
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chizl
Wandering Muse
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Post by chizl on Feb 21, 2010 20:31:18 GMT -5
Thank you all for your wonderful words. I'm always so surprised to get replies...haven't quite figured out if that's sad or not. =)
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 27, 2010 20:24:26 GMT -5
chizl-
Dine in my soul Devour the dark Drink till your heart's content
How exciting and sensual this work is. BRAVO. Especially the above three lines. Loved them and all of your spirited invocation! Delicious write! Exalt (will have to come back later)! molly
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Post by unsinkmolly on Mar 6, 2010 23:44:04 GMT -5
Exalt finally paid!
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