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Post by ~ Arty k ~ on Jan 3, 2010 9:56:25 GMT -5
overlooking the precious flag he examines how terror combats fear verdict is backbone succeeds without comfortable crowns wretched struggles force leaders throughout biblical past an insensitive dark void offends a perfect union
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Jan 4, 2010 9:26:21 GMT -5
Well said! Brilliant, arty. Loved it. Really grabbed the reader through your passionate pen. I owe you an exalt for this.
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jan 8, 2010 16:17:14 GMT -5
hi Arty,
our flag represents us as a nation, both good and bad. sometimes our government does bad, creates situations we don't want to be part of, and they hold the flag in front of them as if it gives them permission to do anything they want.
it is up to us as people to live with our actions, regardless of who tells us to do it. We must always keep our belief true and close to our hearts, in family, in love.
that this is a drop poem is amazing, you say so much that it seems as there is no limitation. I really enjoyed, take care my friend.
~ Daniel
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 1, 2010 0:47:59 GMT -5
Excellent Arty. really nothing left to say. Exalt. Lady B
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Post by needleme on Feb 9, 2010 9:07:24 GMT -5
Couldn't help but replay the twin towers in my mind reading this. What a wonderful poem!
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