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Post by dakreator on Jan 17, 2010 11:45:19 GMT -5
If you would ask me to live, then i will live. Or ask me to love, and i will give this heart of mine.
A heart as soft, a heart as kind, A heart as sound and free, And this heart i will give to you.
Ask that heart to stay, and it will stay. To do your sweet will Or perhaps ask it to languish till it fades away, And this ill do for you.
Ask me to cry, and i will cry While i have eyes to see, And if i had none, Il ask my heart to weep
Ask me to despair, and yes my love ill despair Under that cypress tree, Or ask me to die, and i will dare even death for thee.
You are my life, my love, my heart, The very eyes of me And you hold command over every part of me To live or die for thee.
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 19, 2010 20:44:40 GMT -5
Welcome DT. This is so loving. Great expression of devotion. Lady B
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Post by clearbluespark on Jan 20, 2010 12:57:29 GMT -5
Lovely drops poem...dakreator...so many wonderful lines in this piece. Welcome to TPS!
Keep writing...
Cheers,
G.
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Post by Mack Knife on Jan 20, 2010 18:27:20 GMT -5
excellent- a mature love piece- im impressed with it
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 13, 2010 21:23:41 GMT -5
very well done. the ferocious power of devotion.
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