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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 2, 2010 20:21:54 GMT -5
My lonely struggle, dark tendrils Fear diamond flakes, snow crystals falling Calm my icy hopes
When arrested by dark void Lonliness, wretchedness Enlighten me, diamond candles Past terror
Snow crystals, fall Ice diamonds, precious Succeed in my comfort
(a/n that was hard, i think i slipped in a by to make the sentence flow)
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 7, 2010 0:17:15 GMT -5
Wowee. Chels honey, this is outstanding. The imagery is truly amazing. Extremely powerful emotions. *hug* Exalt. Lady B
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Post by needleme on Feb 9, 2010 9:04:30 GMT -5
The depth of this drops poem is unbelievable. Very MUCH enjoyed!
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 21, 2010 16:32:01 GMT -5
Well, if this was hard, you certainly made it seem easy. Loved it. The imagery, the flow....amazing. Exalt!
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