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Post by esotericrrh on Mar 14, 2010 17:03:26 GMT -5
eat bolts family dinner she wretched, enlightenment factory he rants, precious, brutal fears
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 15, 2010 14:46:42 GMT -5
OhMyGosh, this is priceless eso. Love it. Welcome to TPS. Lady B
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Post by esotericrrh on Mar 15, 2010 22:25:11 GMT -5
thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
-Roxy
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 17, 2010 22:06:58 GMT -5
This was striiking, I loved it. reminds me of some of my family dinners recently. Beautiful drops.
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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on Mar 30, 2010 12:54:57 GMT -5
the intro really caught my attention with any piece, having a good grabber is evidence of a skillful writer and word arranger
well done
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Post by Ne Vile Velis on Mar 31, 2010 18:06:32 GMT -5
nothing like a awkward family dinner... well presented (I loved it)
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Post by unsinkmolly on Apr 16, 2010 20:50:26 GMT -5
very powerful! what punch! m
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Post by esotericrrh on Apr 21, 2010 23:54:04 GMT -5
thanks guys
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Post by needleme on May 7, 2010 8:54:59 GMT -5
I....LOL....I got a big tickle out of this! I could see it all played out..."Eat bolts, you dolt!", her unwanted ugly observations spewed as a garnish to the 'bolts'...and he! He fights back with threats, emotional, verbal....such a wonderfully disfunctional American family! Love it!!!!!!!!!
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