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Post by Ne Vile Velis on Mar 31, 2010 18:00:49 GMT -5
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Mar 31, 2010 21:33:45 GMT -5
I completely understand the title behind this one now that I've read it and seen the format of your poem. Incredibly penned and thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Apr 13, 2010 19:17:05 GMT -5
I loved the formatting of this, it added another layer to an already complex and interesting piece. Would hardly know that it was a drop, it worked so well. Beautiful.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Apr 16, 2010 1:47:55 GMT -5
This one truly pops!!!! Bravo! m
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