rietun
Established Muse
"Some things are beyond telling."
Posts: 134
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Post by rietun on Jun 28, 2010 2:20:06 GMT -5
Specialist steals my hope Transformation.
Procedure doubles. Doubt. Can't preview the foreseeable horror. Stiff.
Center Emerges, rages, explodes
Outstanding photographic memory. Disadvantage...
Faithful raining in me An eccentric trigger Revised circle.
6/28/10
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 4, 2010 19:20:42 GMT -5
This was beautiful and incredible to read. Such expression and the format added even more to this. Amazing!
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Post by inflames on Aug 6, 2010 10:32:22 GMT -5
Great format- really adds something extra to this. I enjoyed the read!
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Post by rayofsun on Aug 6, 2010 11:00:56 GMT -5
I enjoyed this one quite a bit, it's very different than most of what I've been reading. The format and color of the words add layers to this almost adding (inner) dialogue within the poem. Well done.
rae
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Post by pinkdictator on Aug 7, 2010 16:19:55 GMT -5
All the colors got my attention. What can I say, I'm easily amused. It wa a very good and interesting read.
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