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Darling
Aug 3, 2010 22:20:45 GMT -5
Post by inflames on Aug 3, 2010 22:20:45 GMT -5
Darling
Darling speaks, "he is blackmail, an eccentric memory."
he rages, a constant hypothetical faithfulness. choosing a trigger, Darling explodes.
"he is desirable rubbish. a photographic horror," Darling swears.
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Darling
Aug 3, 2010 23:57:43 GMT -5
Post by oursummertrees. on Aug 3, 2010 23:57:43 GMT -5
I love it! In a way - it's like an answer to the one I wrote, I don't know if you meant it that way but it totally works! I really love "he is blackmail, an eccentric memory." Great opening and it just plays out dramatically from there. I love a good scene -Trees
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Darling
Aug 4, 2010 15:32:28 GMT -5
Post by messenger on Aug 4, 2010 15:32:28 GMT -5
That is too cool,
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Darling
Aug 5, 2010 11:15:39 GMT -5
Post by dragonfilth on Aug 5, 2010 11:15:39 GMT -5
reminds me of a ex, great poem, exalt
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Darling
Aug 5, 2010 16:54:32 GMT -5
Post by everhopeful on Aug 5, 2010 16:54:32 GMT -5
Is it just me or have some new words been added to the ones available I liked this, obviously working with a limited vocabulary has it's difficulties but I think you made it work to your advantage here because it manages to convey a sense of aloofness in the speaker and her view of her darling's words, as well as showing him to be quite the little dictator! Enjoyed the read. Mick
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Darling
Aug 5, 2010 16:55:24 GMT -5
Post by inflames on Aug 5, 2010 16:55:24 GMT -5
Hey- you're allowed to modifying tenses! I didn't add any other words. =(
But thanks for the comments everyone. I found this challenging- but I enjoyed working on it. =)
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Post by mistyeve2 on Aug 6, 2010 8:23:13 GMT -5
Help, I don't understand how to post my poems
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Darling
Aug 6, 2010 10:22:51 GMT -5
Post by inflames on Aug 6, 2010 10:22:51 GMT -5
Help, I don't understand how to post my poems Hi, Just go into the board you wish to post in and click the "new thread" button at the top of the page. =)
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Darling
Aug 9, 2010 21:51:47 GMT -5
Post by rcknrlla on Aug 9, 2010 21:51:47 GMT -5
Hey inflames,
This work is just like looking a mirror of my Past, and as long as I don't get too close to it--, it don't even hurt a bit. Even so I'm glad those days are gone... A tremendously powerful piece of poetry.
until...
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Darling
Aug 11, 2010 16:59:53 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Aug 11, 2010 16:59:53 GMT -5
OhMyGosh! Kit Kat, You nailed this one to the wall. Your ability to put the emphasis in just the right place is amazing. I felt the anger, the amusement, the sardonic shake of the head. It shows a raw and honest viewpoint of someone who is totally clueless to how they perceived by others. I really felt this poem. You were not limited by the Drop words one iota. Powerful. Very powerful. Bookmark and Exalt.
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Darling
Oct 12, 2010 11:58:12 GMT -5
Post by Scarltt32 on Oct 12, 2010 11:58:12 GMT -5
Inflames, LOVE IT! wow, what a great write..love.."he is blackmail, an eccentric memory." Exalt when able!Paid
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Darling
Oct 24, 2010 18:29:26 GMT -5
Post by leiloni on Oct 24, 2010 18:29:26 GMT -5
I was easily blown away by your 'Darling' challenge. Such creativity!! Thank goodness I am not one of the judges for this challenge. I would have a difficult time in choosing. There are so many creative ones here.
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Darling
Oct 26, 2010 8:29:56 GMT -5
Post by (k) shades of silence on Oct 26, 2010 8:29:56 GMT -5
I love the total expression of this poem. There's a strange yet comfortable vibe floating in this. I can't put my finger exactly on what it is I like so much about this poem, and I think that very quality is what makes it so great.
The Drops certainly did not hold you back.
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Darling
Oct 26, 2010 12:16:59 GMT -5
Post by inflames on Oct 26, 2010 12:16:59 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments everyone. I appreciate the encouragement. =)
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Darling
Jan 2, 2011 21:42:45 GMT -5
Post by windowflower on Jan 2, 2011 21:42:45 GMT -5
Darling speaks, "he is blackmail, an eccentric memory."
I love this, darling
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