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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Aug 14, 2010 9:50:07 GMT -5
A Hug and a Kiss
Kiss soft, gentle brushing, exciting, enchanting wet, sweet, warm, close caring, loving, embracing stimulating, satisfying Hug
I cannot now think what the name of this format is..maybe someone else will know..hope this work's for this particular forum.;..
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Post by rayofsun on Aug 14, 2010 23:53:54 GMT -5
hmm, it's close to a cinquain but with a couple extra lines...whatever it is, it is sweet. rae
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Aug 21, 2010 2:43:53 GMT -5
rayofsun ~It may very well be..I wished I could remember, as there is a name for it and for the life of me can't remember...I'm sure glad you enjoyed it my firend...Thanks for taking the time to read and respond....musie
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 18, 2010 1:25:57 GMT -5
Forget the format name...! This just touches that emotion inside and brings the words to life. The amazing thing about the poem is the 'hug' coming after the kiss. To me, that just seals the deal. Excellent Drops. Kudos! Lady B
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Sept 25, 2010 0:47:24 GMT -5
Lady B~Thank you so much for the kind response...your comment's mean a great deal....musie
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Post by Lady Wildalice on Sept 27, 2010 12:40:49 GMT -5
Are you referring to a Ethree or a diamante poem? This is a lovely piece and very well done. thank you.
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Post by Gurl23 on Sept 28, 2010 11:02:51 GMT -5
I love it! A hug and a kiss, so deliciously described. Makes me wish I had my man nearby!
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Oct 3, 2010 18:01:09 GMT -5
Wildalice and Gurl...I thank you so much for your kind responses...I would have to look it up again to remember, but I think it is an Ether...my memory is gone when it come's to form's anymore..especially one's like this...Thanks again for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed...musie
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