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Post by windowflower on Jan 2, 2011 22:04:25 GMT -5
she pretends behind breezes suffers beside counterpart kisses questioning collected tears exchanged beneath theater love rituals
proceeds throughout bitten risks triumphs fake flower ventures rounding comparable crisp fears over freak myth mixtures
this imminent satire endless
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Post by everhopeful on Jan 3, 2011 15:23:13 GMT -5
I dont quite know how you managed this, but to make a drops poem and manage to retain your poetic voice and style is a feat to behold! If it wasn't for the board this is in I wouldn't have had an inkling that it was all formed from prompt words, and I am almost speechless by how coherent, well formed and vivid it is. Just awesome, unbelievable work 'flower... Exalt, Mick
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jan 11, 2011 22:42:21 GMT -5
I agree, this is just incredible. Loved the flow and the wording and everything about this windowflower, gorgeous drops.
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Post by dragonfilth on Jan 22, 2011 19:29:16 GMT -5
wow amazing i love the picture you painted with the words i have to exalt this... it would be wrong not to
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Post by windowflower on Feb 2, 2011 21:19:43 GMT -5
thanks so much..this was really fun hope to try it again!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jun 23, 2011 13:59:41 GMT -5
My lovely Flower, This is superb. The flow and style are clearly yours. That is extremely rare in a Drops write. The poem itself is fabulous and could hold it's own in any board! So glad I happened on this one. Exalt. Lady B
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Post by Created2Write on Jul 17, 2011 17:19:46 GMT -5
I know this not to be an easy feat in this board but you made it seem so. Haven't been here in ages, glad I came today. exalt
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