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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 21, 2011 22:02:00 GMT -5
Welcome to the Drops board. It's always nice to see a new face around here. I really liked this, you achieved excellent flow. Well done
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Post by inflames on Feb 21, 2011 22:07:21 GMT -5
Really great first experience. =) I quite enjoyed your work.
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Post by oursummertrees. on Feb 22, 2011 3:39:47 GMT -5
Welcome -- and do come back for more I really liked the transition from the first to second stanza - it:s well connected there. Nice work! -Trees
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Post by knotapoet on Feb 24, 2011 23:16:46 GMT -5
Well done.Nice first drop.I love the line The world rots in tiring noise,this is so true
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Post by Shiloh on Feb 25, 2011 0:06:42 GMT -5
Very nice
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