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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 14, 2011 6:34:30 GMT -5
Shadows sigh Piano cries Spectrum crashes Silent
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Post by inflames on Feb 21, 2011 22:08:52 GMT -5
Wow. This is beautiful. Absolutely stunning Jah. For so little words, you really create an impact. =)Well done.
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Post by oursummertrees. on Feb 22, 2011 3:41:15 GMT -5
Jah - fantastic. Truly.
-Trees
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Post by everhopeful on Feb 22, 2011 9:34:13 GMT -5
I love the formatting of this one, it adds extra visual impact to a poem which relies upon the impact of only a few words to convery a message - not only does it convey the message it becomes it. Brilliant poetry, without even taking into account it's a drops piece. Exalt, Mick
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Feb 22, 2011 14:39:19 GMT -5
Very well expressed in so few word's and I found myself identifying with it....Thank you for sharing such a tender hearted piece....musie
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Post by Gurl23 on Feb 24, 2011 14:41:02 GMT -5
Beautiful - agree w/all of the above!
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Post by up2quark on Feb 26, 2011 16:01:28 GMT -5
great imagery created, love the personified effect of sadness!
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