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Post by smokinjoe72 on Mar 1, 2011 11:46:09 GMT -5
distressed brain sighs disregards magical scores silent piano cries
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 1, 2011 21:42:28 GMT -5
So can relate to this, beautifully phrased, excellent drops piece.
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Post by knotapoet on Mar 2, 2011 21:45:17 GMT -5
That really good.Nice job
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Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 3:00:04 GMT -5
This was so near to being a haiku/senyu, which would have been amazing - not to detract from the magnificence of your current piece. The last line was utter genius - splendid job~
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