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Post by inflames on Mar 5, 2011 15:21:27 GMT -5
Culprit.
he oppresses; a culprit crashes, disposed into the tower.
disregard the sighs, she cries another warning.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 7, 2011 22:40:57 GMT -5
hmmm.... this is really interesting, so many ways that it culd be interpreted. Brilliant drops, really enjoyed it.
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Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 3:02:18 GMT -5
This definitely held your style about it, although composed of a different caliber of language than I assume you would have normally chosen. Really enjoyed this piece~
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Post by johan32 on Mar 24, 2011 15:47:46 GMT -5
The ambiguity of "he" promotes thought, which makes me think that this is about domestic violence?
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 31, 2011 11:23:34 GMT -5
*applause* Excellent drops Kat. The simple format belies the gravity of the words. The close brings it full circle. Exalt. Lady B
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Post by Shiloh on Mar 31, 2011 23:40:02 GMT -5
Drop it like its hot..... nice work
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Post by inflames on Apr 3, 2011 20:35:36 GMT -5
Thanks everyone. =)
And yes, I suppose it could be about domestic violence. Or perhaps not. It's open to interpretation. I'm not sure I know what my poetry is about half the time.
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