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Post by Linaeve {Ever Smiling} on Mar 13, 2011 14:31:15 GMT -5
(My first attempt at Drop Poetry!)
Why, Sister? Underneath He is Tiring Warning
Evidence Father reacts She cries distress Lecture
World crashes Silent birth She cries invalid Circumstance
Why, Sister?
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 13, 2011 16:03:54 GMT -5
Powerful drop...so much said in few word's and completely understood by the reader...well done I say...musie
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Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 2:58:08 GMT -5
Nice to see you found and are experimenting with the Drops page - your poem was definitely a compacted volume of meaning. Each line seemed to add another step to the stairs, another page to the tale, another layer to the meaning. Awesome job~
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Post by inflames on Mar 20, 2011 18:58:06 GMT -5
Repetition always works so well in drop eh? I really enjoyed this. Great first attempt.
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