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Post by Riverrose ~April!!!~ on Apr 28, 2011 15:34:52 GMT -5
Talk lower, lower...noise is too tiring. Youth hums in the business it attends, Then, dashes...older, in injury; Its bright summer must then rot.
Another silent leak, another obstruction; The sprout rots, staggers, pants. She is a sail in slices, tired, unsafe. Poor baby, the colors run in the entrance.
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Post by - Moirae - on Apr 28, 2011 15:52:13 GMT -5
This is a fine example of a drop! This piece is so deep and emotional. Lovely work.
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Post by bcoyotey on May 1, 2011 16:46:37 GMT -5
A perfect Drops. Incredible flow and strong emotion. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 8, 2011 5:22:49 GMT -5
I agree, beautiful and deep. Love that final line.
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