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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on May 8, 2011 13:03:08 GMT -5
I'm not sure I got this down, but it was mega fun to give it a shot.The Green Fairy
The grass is chirpin' baby, Birds sail under cloud, Strawberry fruit foolin', A youth's summer endeavor.
Panting beneath a flower fragrance, The silent rumbling idea, Anchor to abstract beaches, A tiring dramatic playground.
Instinct humming, she ran, Bright ribbons stagger behind, Dashing she reached another, Dodging the leader, Green Fairy. [/i]
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Post by bcoyotey on May 9, 2011 14:21:25 GMT -5
Excellent Drops lil. The imagery is marvelous. I like the form as well. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 11, 2011 6:57:04 GMT -5
Pretty and evocative drops, love the rhythm and the construction was excellent Very much enjoyed.
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Post by - Moirae - on May 11, 2011 18:36:39 GMT -5
This was such a fun and playful drops! I really enjoyed the story you wove into these words. Very cleverly done Lily.
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on May 12, 2011 7:23:51 GMT -5
Fank you everyone, you've made me feel curiously shy now.. Those drops can get darn messy when you drag and drop 'em can't they? It was definitely a refreshing challange. I'm ecstatic it came across ok. Cheers for reading it!
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Post by theDSW on May 12, 2011 12:56:01 GMT -5
This is the kind of drops that only our dear Lady can come up with...Great drops on this Lilith,heh... DSW
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on May 12, 2011 14:55:24 GMT -5
Thank you good sir. You rock my socks. ^.^
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Post by abigailmarie on May 13, 2011 15:13:38 GMT -5
Love how abstract this is, I especially like the third stanza- very very good work. I loved the line "a silent rumbling idea", it almost gives you a sort of adrenaline rush just reading it
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on May 13, 2011 15:50:11 GMT -5
Fanks! Since I'm a recent fan of yours, your comments and thoughts mean a lot ^.^
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Post by dragonfilth on Sept 17, 2011 11:46:37 GMT -5
i love this and its your first wow this is some awesome work out of your brain box nicely done
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