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Autumn
Jun 16, 2011 8:55:34 GMT -5
Post by Riverrose ~April!!!~ on Jun 16, 2011 8:55:34 GMT -5
When Summer gets older, She designates the flower-fruit to sprout. Color attends to business, Building its basis in the green.
It won't get obstructed; Summer must dash behind, It must get older.
The poor green then must leak, Rots in color. Another, Then another silent green invalid Cooperates, the endeavor to attack the color Gets tiring.
Birds sail to clouds in another beach, Rabbits drill under the grass. Summer must get older, Summer must get older.
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Autumn
Jun 16, 2011 9:32:49 GMT -5
Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Jun 16, 2011 9:32:49 GMT -5
These are stunning drops! So sweet yet sad, the death of summer and the birth of autumn. Such an inspired concept, made even more spectacular as it was created within the confines of those few words offered. Really digging this. Love it!
Lily^^
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Autumn
Jun 19, 2011 14:05:27 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Jun 19, 2011 14:05:27 GMT -5
Incredible drops Rosie. One of the best I have read. Amazing imagery. Such creative originality. Bravo! Lady B
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Autumn
Jun 22, 2011 19:51:33 GMT -5
Post by inflames on Jun 22, 2011 19:51:33 GMT -5
I love the repetition in the end- great stuff. It definitely gets this into my head. I enjoyed your drops today River.
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Autumn
Feb 9, 2012 16:21:41 GMT -5
Post by ~ Sasha ~ on Feb 9, 2012 16:21:41 GMT -5
Woah that's a stunner!! It's so eloquently penned with such wonderful imagery, you truly are the Queen of Drops! Love it!!
Sasha
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Autumn
Feb 10, 2012 12:51:55 GMT -5
Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Feb 10, 2012 12:51:55 GMT -5
Riverrose....given the word's to work with in drop's...this indeed was a remarkable piece from your pen....Very creative...I SO enjoyed the read my friend.....Musie
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