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Leo
Jul 18, 2011 3:54:58 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 18, 2011 3:54:58 GMT -5
Bright white teeth, a star lion shining. Past the waters surface he marched Leading silent problems over the world's cool black skin
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jodzy
Established Muse
Posts: 248
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Leo
Jul 18, 2011 4:26:34 GMT -5
Post by jodzy on Jul 18, 2011 4:26:34 GMT -5
evokes interesting images, I like this
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Leo
Jul 18, 2011 23:58:11 GMT -5
Post by Shiloh on Jul 18, 2011 23:58:11 GMT -5
Crisp, clean, beautiful
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Leo
Jul 20, 2011 17:23:35 GMT -5
Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Jul 20, 2011 17:23:35 GMT -5
I love this.. But I'm biased, being born under that fiery and roaring lion. I'm a leo and proud Beautifully put together. These are vivid and clever Drops. Bravo! Lily^^
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Ade
Established Muse
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Posts: 299
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Leo
Jul 21, 2011 2:31:05 GMT -5
Post by Ade on Jul 21, 2011 2:31:05 GMT -5
You don't have to be a star gazer to appreciate a good zodiac poem, and that's exactly what this is. I loved the image of the stars in the darkness of the night sky as being like the animal they represent marching past waters overhead.
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Leo
Jul 21, 2011 9:51:38 GMT -5
Post by Riverrose ~April!!!~ on Jul 21, 2011 9:51:38 GMT -5
Skillfully put together! What a clever Drops. I love how you were able to pick that out of those words- great job, Riverrose
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Leo
Aug 28, 2011 17:09:11 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Aug 28, 2011 17:09:11 GMT -5
Jah-Jah, You are still the Queen my dear. Not only a clever poem, but amazingly accurate! Love it. *hug* Lady B
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Leo
Aug 28, 2011 18:40:16 GMT -5
Post by djk ~ 8000 on Aug 28, 2011 18:40:16 GMT -5
Makes me wish I was born under the Leo sign myself! Quite crisp and quite charming.
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Leo
Sept 17, 2011 11:43:17 GMT -5
Post by dragonfilth on Sept 17, 2011 11:43:17 GMT -5
perfect to the letter p this is a great and fantastic piece
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Leo
Sept 22, 2011 2:59:49 GMT -5
Post by AoR on Sept 22, 2011 2:59:49 GMT -5
Magnificent work! I had wanted to use the word lion, but couldn't piece it together. I love the imagery you painted so beautifully and elegantly. Love that last line especially! These Drops are very challenging but a lot of fun lol. ^-^
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Leo
Nov 20, 2011 16:43:23 GMT -5
Post by ltlpencil on Nov 20, 2011 16:43:23 GMT -5
Succinct imagery – well done!
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