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Post by ThinKingHeart(Questing.....) on Dec 17, 2011 10:21:01 GMT -5
A religion it is hailing wealth, worry puzzling eyne. Dancing streetlights, discreetly illumining, Halls ripped to level heartlands. It is urbanization!
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Post by etchers on Dec 19, 2011 5:57:01 GMT -5
Lol This is awesome. Good job
I laughed at the last line for some reason, It was almost as if you were like "Aha! I've found a way to end it"
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Post by ThinKingHeart(Questing.....) on Dec 19, 2011 6:47:00 GMT -5
Lol This is awesome. Good job I laughed at the last line for some reason, It was almost as if you were like "Aha! I've found a way to end it" You are bang on the head. It does look like that But actually Urbanization and religion caught my eye before any other word. And I filled the gap then. It goes to show what words and punctuation can do with their arrangement. Thanks for reading. cheers, ---Think---
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Dec 21, 2011 12:27:51 GMT -5
Nicely composed.
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Post by windowflower on Jan 12, 2012 22:40:05 GMT -5
aha.. urbanization...that it is! Nice drop job
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Post by ThinKingHeart(Questing.....) on Jan 13, 2012 12:33:11 GMT -5
Thanks hemz and windowflower for those words. Snehal
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