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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Dec 31, 2011 0:23:02 GMT -5
closely critical religion even exceeding goodness worries wealth willed in inconsistent gravity is nasty misstatement
in shame songbirds dolefully dance
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Post by ThinKingHeart(Questing.....) on Dec 31, 2011 2:42:49 GMT -5
Hey jah, That was so piercing write. Skillfully splashed the drops and still such a wonderful write. Kudos! Loved the drops. ---Thinkingheart
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Post by bcoyotey on Dec 31, 2011 16:05:11 GMT -5
So true Jah-Jah. You are still the queen of the drops. Amazing clarity in this piece. Lady B
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 31, 2011 17:34:07 GMT -5
I agree with B, you are the Queen of the Drops dear. You artfully craft these words into a beautiful poem that does not read as a drops piece at all. I loved the last line. Well done.
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 6, 2012 0:37:41 GMT -5
Jah~this was simply a great piece of work! Hit's the nail right on the head with today's genre of Movie's and how they market them....Very creative drop! I really enjoyed the read....musie
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