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Post by Riverrose ~April!!!~ on Jan 30, 2012 20:01:17 GMT -5
~Refresh compulsory dance~
Hail, inconsistant songbird! Side the overhead, joviality Refuse even the approximate- Addled streetlight Conversely, it enabled Lady Illumining To combine tender sugar twinkles Gravity exceeding Closely canceled shame To quit reducing goodness In replacing ersatz heartlands
Save the high timing- Covering unconcern...slip urbabization A willing goodbye.
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Post by djk ~ 8000 on Jan 30, 2012 20:48:33 GMT -5
Simply beautiful words with a beautiful presentation. It touched something inside of me!!!
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Post by ~ Sasha ~ on Feb 3, 2012 12:58:25 GMT -5
That's beautiful and just wonderful! I so love it and enjoyed reading it. That's Great Kate Sashers ;D
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Feb 4, 2012 9:29:25 GMT -5
This was so creative in the use of the Challenge word's...some great imagery in this piece....truly enjoyed the read...Thank you for sharing....Musie
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Feb 5, 2012 4:47:05 GMT -5
Fantastic drops! I love the use of colour here, it really adds to the overall atmosphere and feeling. My favourite line is this -->
'To combine tender sugar twinkles'
I just love the image of twinling suagr.. So pretty! Heh heh. Such clarity and creative prowess on display here. Bravo!
Lily^^
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