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Post by NT - Feeling Old... on Aug 27, 2004 15:04:04 GMT -5
meh, i guess i did this last night.. i like playing with these things.. but i don't really know what this is.. the last part rhymes, but the rest doesn't, and.. yeah. i also don't know what to call it.. so it remains 'untitled'
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buried eyes laugh inhaled over soft sunlight and a deadly frigid moon ghosts mute my scars fell the star i never dreamed of with ashes of a secret desire, passion haunted smiles, cold embrace end to end within death's grave the poets each with rhyme are laid
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though i do find it insanely cool that TPS has one of these now.. ;D
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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2004 14:58:24 GMT -5
Really like the last two lines NT. Nice work.
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Sept 3, 2004 11:32:52 GMT -5
Wow, nicely done! This one's a lot better than my haiku that's for sure. ;D
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Post by cathy10205 on Jun 1, 2006 19:18:30 GMT -5
wow, i tried the drops and it turned out..well...better not go into that ..^^ but that poem was really nice.
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