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Post by waterlily07 on Sept 12, 2004 12:36:16 GMT -5
Here's another crack in using Drops of Poetry, but this time a haiku. Well hope you all enjoy it. The ghostly sad moon Dances with echoing dreams A passion of rhyme
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Sept 15, 2004 4:13:47 GMT -5
Nice, I like it
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Post by ThousandFaces on Sept 16, 2004 14:03:08 GMT -5
Made me vision someone dancing with the ghost of a lover on a cold clear night...
Well Done.
Your Humble and Obedient Servant,
T.F.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 4, 2004 18:50:59 GMT -5
Nice one waterlilly
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Post by waterlily07 on Oct 5, 2004 22:16:52 GMT -5
Thanks everyone.
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Post by AlienFaery on Oct 8, 2004 21:48:52 GMT -5
Lovely haiku. - M
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Post by Kasurin on Oct 11, 2004 9:07:10 GMT -5
" A passion of rhyme". I like that. =) I like how it was a play on the saying " A crime of passion ". Nicely done! I'm not a fan of haikus but I liked your's a lot.
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Post by waterlily07 on Oct 11, 2004 22:23:39 GMT -5
Thanks for your comments, AlienFaery and Kasurin. ;D
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