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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Nov 24, 2004 17:53:22 GMT -5
An orchid silently rose of passion Tears dove to enchant a soul Dreams taste of a vanilla blossom Please quiet your echo of a battle
Choke an angel for awful art Charm a blue girl to a lady Plead freedom, sound poetry for truth Divide liberty, poverty, breathe deadly pain
A daffodil inhaled the sunlight drink Shone glory to enchant your dreams Freedom to divide angel tears, death For the deadly, bare, haunting sound
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 12, 2004 18:00:37 GMT -5
Interesting, nice write. I liked: That was a cool line
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Dec 12, 2004 23:39:54 GMT -5
Amaranthine -- Thank you I had fun writing this poem
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2005 16:02:59 GMT -5
I like that. Nice one ROTF.
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jan 10, 2005 18:05:26 GMT -5
Thanks DOR. I'm glad you liked it. -- Jus
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