Daisie
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Post by Daisie on Dec 15, 2004 21:46:02 GMT -5
she runs in the gloom not stopping to breathe, not waiting for the shadows to jump into the still of the night every blade of grass spells trouble every tree a ghost she runs
BY daisie
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 22, 2004 17:17:16 GMT -5
I like it Daisie, the feeling of panic or fear is shown in the poem. The only thing I was slightly confused about is in the 1st line "Groom"- did you mean "gloom"? Cause groom reminds me of the wedding kind...which doesn't make sense...
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Daisie
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Post by Daisie on Jan 3, 2005 6:15:10 GMT -5
Thanks a lot. That's a spelling mistake. Fancy I didn't see it when I posted this. Yes, it's fear described here.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2005 16:10:02 GMT -5
Absolutely love that! Nice one Dais.
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