KissingJudas
Wandering Muse
I'll pull you down, kiss your soul...I'll take your breath away.
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Post by KissingJudas on Dec 30, 2004 3:58:43 GMT -5
Morning Loss
I inhaled sunlight and silently recoiled at our cry of truth - A passion so new it lingered - scarring my secret, naked world. Delicious tears simmer softly, taste and posess me, love - I plead with you to follow me when the lines of souls dive fearfully into battle.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 1, 2005 20:27:29 GMT -5
Really cool, I like it
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dayna
Established Muse
I might spend some time downstairs. ~The Incredible String Band~
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Post by dayna on Jan 5, 2005 12:49:32 GMT -5
I think the atmosphere you have created makes this poem
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Post by Sketchy (love is a w----) on Jan 14, 2005 23:47:30 GMT -5
Beautiful.
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